Changes between Version 14 and Version 15 of NYSRFPC122807


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May 21, 2008 11:28:54 PM (5 years ago)
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dkg
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changed tense of background, linked to final report

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  • NYSRFPC122807

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    33= Background = 
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     5This is a public comment that was originally submitted in the lead up to [http://www.oft.state.ny.us/policy/esra/erecords-study.htm the May 2008 Electronic Documents Report to the NY State Governor and Legislature]. 
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    47In 2007 and early 2008, New York State issued a  
    58[http://www.oft.state.ny.us/oftnews/erecords-study.htm Request For Public Comment concerning electronic record policy] for government documents.  This is an attempt to craft a response to that call for comments.  The questions asked by the State appear here as numbered, blockquoted text, like this: 
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    710> 0. Example question 
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    9 The public comment period runs until 2008-01-18.  If you have comments for the state to read, you should mail them to `erecords-study@oft.state.ny.us`.  You should also publish them so others can read the arguments. 
     12The public comment period ran until 2008-01-18.  If you had comments for the state to read, you were expected to mail them to `erecords-study@oft.state.ny.us`.  You should also publish them so others can read the arguments. 
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    1114If you feel that these arguments resonate with you, feel free to copy or cite them in your responses to the State.  And of course, this is the web: you should always feel free to link to this page. 
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    1317= Freedom as a Fundamental Goal =